MARCO+VILA,+CRISTINA

SECOND PRESENTATION(6) fond to see many movies (of movies) hate suffer(+ing) in general those films that made me (make) love (/^v/, not /of/) recently (//i/, not /e/) I have a ggod time seeing it (had, watchin after I would like to talk (after that, don´t pronounce the "l" in talk) the movie tell us (tells) the soundtrack (two stressed syllables, not just the second) OK- keep working, focus on the language point above and keep talking and practising.

Cristina Marco Vila Advanced 2 Mon-Wed 15-17

Why Brazil and Argentina stopped listen to International monetary fun ?

Brazil and Argentina worked together in order to improve his situation with the i nternational monetary fund.

There were a lot of people in Argentina that were seriously upset with the fund power and the government of the country needed to convince this people that the situation had to change.

Both countries are the most debt countries in the IMF, so this organism couldn’t let them to leave the fund.

The presidents of theses countries signed an agreement to protect the growth of the countries against the debt payment. They said that the international financial system doesn’t allow a sustainable development of them  and must establish mechanisms to prevent financial crisis.

On the one hand, they want to change the outcome of tax calculation, on the other hand Brazil an Argentina claim that public infrastructure investment is not a expense, it’s a investment. They tried to join the other countries of Mercosur in this business.

The question is that International fund has a politic behaviour instead of a technical one so that, the union of several countries could change the context of the global economy.

CORRECTIONS AND ASSESSMENT

Why did B r azil and Argentina stop listening to the International Monetary Fund ?

Brazil and Argentina worked together in order to improve their situation with the In ternational Monetary Fund. There were a lot of people in Argentina that were seriously upset with the fund power and the government of the country needed to persuade these people that the situation was going to change. These two are the most heavily i ndebted countries in the IMF, so their release was unthinkable.

The presidents of theses countries signed an agreement to protect the growth of their economies against the debt payment. They said that the international financial system doesn’t allow a sustainable development for them and that it ought to establish mechanisms to prevent future financial crises.

On the one hand, they want to change the outcome of tax calculation .On the other, Brazil an Argentina claim that public infrastructure investment is not an expense, it’s an investment. They tried to join the other countries of Mercosur in this business.

The question is that International fund has a politic behaviour instead of a technical one so that, the union of several countries could change the context of the global economy.

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HOW TO BE GOOD

This book is about how you can change your life in a moment .(???). Katie is a woman that works as a doctor, her husband David writes a column in a local newspaper. She asks her husband for divorce by phone when she was meeting with her lover.

After that, David meets a guru and he replaced his bad temper and frustation by altruism and pleasantries.

The transformation of David is very upsetting to Katie and she doesn't know what to do and how to behave. She hated David's behavior when he was selfish and no comprehensive but in this moment she feels bad person.

I believe that Katie is a bit weepy and she doesn't like her new situation.

To sum up, this story is a bit crazy and unrealistic.

CORRECTIONS AND ASSESSMENT

HOW TO BE GOOD

This book is about how your life can change overnight .(???). Katie is a woman that works as a doctor, her husband David writes a column in a local newspaper. She asks her husband for divorce by phone when she was meeting with her lover.

After that, David meets a guru and he replaced his bad temper and frustation by altruism and pleasantries.

The transformation of David is very upsetting to Katie and she doesn't know what to do and how to behave. She hated David's behavior when he was selfish and no comprehensive but in this moment she feels bad person.

I believe that Katie is a bit weepy and she doesn't like her new situation.

To sum up, this story is a bit crazy and unrealistic.